hi readerś today me and my class were doing warm up slides to warm up for our work. warm up slides is when you warm up for your writing by giving yourself 10 minutes to write a story based on a picture . Anyways when our time was up me and Gracie were chosen to be bloggers of the week. here's a story i wrote atv warm up slides itś not finished but i think you'll like it. BYE😀
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, August 9, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Freyja,
ReplyDeleteThank you for uploading your work on to your blog.
I like the way that you have explained how our writing warm up slides work.
Next time remember in your blog post to have capital letters!
I look forward to reading your next blog post ☺️
Miss Lauder